Lesbian Contemporary Romance
Paperback: 264 pages
Publisher: Bold Strokes Books (February 17, 2015)
Amazon: Betting on Love
Amazon Kindle: Betting on Love
Land poor, Elly leaves the family farm and heads to the big city to become something better than a waitress in a small-town diner. Though she’s succumbed to economic necessity and the siren song of her one-time lover, Alex, she can’t bear to give up the farm that has been in her family for generations. As much as she wants to, she can’t have everything she desires, and she’ll have to decide what is more important: the past or the future.
Alex has always been a daredevil, up for anything, never tying herself down to anyone. When she falls head over heels for quiet Elly, everyone’s surprised, no one more than her best friend and occasional lover, Will. As things heat up between them, Elly must choose between her past and her future, and Alex is faced with a decision that will shake her to the core of all she holds dear.
Overall a very well-written story, with strong, authentic characters and a very delicate, soft touch of coming-of-age plot under the romance. I enjoyed this book quite a lot and would recommend it to an interested reader. The book gets off an awkward start that doesn't really feel like a start, or even as if the story is starting in the middle. But the plot that develops from this start is done very well. It's strongly character-driven and takes some unexpected - therefore good - twists and turns, which happily are always in-character for the character triggering that twist. Plus, subplots. While at the surface, this might look like a romance, underneath runs a very fine and delicate coming-of-age/growing-up plot. Sometimes it's a little too delicate, but it's there. Very nice. Full points here for clever use of setting. There were two settings/props that played a very strong part in the story: a farm and the other character's motorcycle. Both settings/props were used very well, featured strongly, and even stood symbolic of the character, their personal development, and of the development of their love story. That was done very elegantly and very well. Like the coming-of-age plot, the character development sometimes was a little ... too hidden. Yet both main characters developed; they grew, they grew up. Plus additional character development of side characters. Again somewhat hidden but very noticeable in their words and actions. Very smoothly flowing - so smoothly that you aren't even aware of time passing or your progress through the book, until something startles you out of it. (At least, that's what happened to me). Now, it's a somewhat difficult style that I am not sure many readers will enjoy. Mostly beccause the author doesn't give a lot of insight into the characters heads and emotions and into their development. And it's true, occasionally the author could have done with a little more showing instead of presenting the reader with facts. However, it is obvious from the text that this is the author's personal style, and I know other authors who don't bother explaining a lot. They present the reader with their story and let the reader draw their own conclusions. And while I enjoy the insights into characters' minds and emotions a lot, I am also aware that this particular style is a lot harder to pull of successfully. So, kudos to the author.
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